Sketchbook Pages

Hello, i'm new here. Here are some of my drawings:









Thanks for viewing!

the third sketch is wonderfull

Thanks Kaz! =D

Damned !!
Real good works
I agree with Kaz, the third sketch is awesome !!
More !
^-^

Horante: Hey thanks!Great that you like them. XD Here are more:

great
work. The hard part is going in your favor and should probably follow
the scenario. I'm just thinking of Daniel Clowes. Am I wrong?

definitely the third one of the first page is truely awsome ...
The others got some anatomie and proportions issues , that make look them a bit odd !!
Stilll good work , keep it up !!


Concerning the comic , i would say that composition overall isn't really dynamic it's too much static i think ! yet the apple one is quite nice !!

LP: It's Adrian Tomine actually,but since he emulates Daniel Clowes, you're right.So i suppose i'm an imitation of an imitation. Owo;; Yes,i think i'll have to make the flow of the story more understandable. Thank you for the feedback!

Asahi: Thank you for the encouragement! Yes,i'll take note and try to correct the anatomy and proportions next time.I'll see what i can do with the composition and such for the new pages of the comic when i get down to it.Much thanks!

I've something else that's kind of like the third drawing that i posted,so here it is:



And some more drawings:




An unfinished comic strip that i'm experimenting with:


Thank you for looking!

how~ i like your first and second draw that's awesome, for your comics i want more :3

i agree with onii the first and second draw are so amazing

Onii : Thank you for the encouragement! =DD

Kaz : Hehe,thanks a bunch.